Inner Magic

Look a little deeper

Eventually I set aside what I am reading and write. It is best, or so it seems to me, to arrive at writing from a place of stillness. There is depth in such writing. I recognize the depth because I have the sense of someone else there doing the work; it arises and sets itself on the page, then I show up and do some useful editing. This is ordinary magic, there is no effort to do anything.

The following bit is the start of a fairy tale. There seems to be a fairy tale need in me these days. I have been re-reading Joan Aiken and she has that effect on me. This is only the start of one, so be patient with me please. It has been a while in the making.

Look a Little Deeper

So, I knew this man once, who came home looking for his lover, but she had run off.

Run off with the butcher’s wife?  No, no, just… off somewhere.  She had something to do.  When he left that morning she had been looking for her shoes, so he had had a hint.

It wasn’t that he was worried.  They had always, so far, been good lovers: sweet and constant.  He wasn’t worried that she wouldn’t come back.  It was more about who would she be when she did get back? She had the tendency to be, well, perhaps a little extreme, sometimes.  Once she had come home with a saxophone and a saxophone teacher. The three of them had lived together in the same bed for 4 months.  The saxophone teacher was very nice, if a little young, and she made very good eggs at breakfast.  But then, he had never liked saxophone very much and it really was a very small bed.

So, he was actually, just a little worried and slightly curious about what happens next, (aren’t you?)

She had first arrived one evening as he sat outside his flat.  It was summer and hot; he turned off everything and opened everything and sat outside in the semi-dark drinking beer.  She was selling flowers, or at least that is what he decided. She knelt before him in a brown gathered skirt and a white men’s shirt rolled up at the sleeves and tied at the waist.  She looked into his eyes and smiling happened.  He was taken in that moment.  For all his life after, he thought of that twilight moment as the hinge of everything: of all happiness and certainty.

She pulled a cloth from her pack and spread it at his feet in the dust of the walkway.  She did it with the flourish and poise of an entertainer, every once and a moment catching his eye.

On it, laid out in a single motion, were flowers made of everything; of wire and paper, bits of metal and plastic used with incredible delicacy; puckered, bent, crimped into authentic flowerhood.  He stared at them, feeling his mouth fall slightly open.  She tilted her head as if to ask what he thought.  He bought everything she had, with everything he had; 17 pounds, 22pence.  He offered her a beer and she stayed; to his everlasting amazement and curiosity.

Gary was one of three Gary’s in his class at school.  It was a popular name that year.  It was the only thing that was popular about him.  He was a quiet boy who did what he was told with good will.  It was for that reason that his teachers never remembered him, and his parents seldom did.  He was not a squeaky wheel and if he earned any attention it was usually a sigh of relief, that at least one child in the bunch was not causing trouble.

Gary decided at some point in his education that what he wanted was to be a success. He was not sure how this was accomplished, but he determined from the subtle comments of his betters that it was by diligence alone.  Therefore, rather than go on to school, at 18, he decided to follow in his father’s footsteps and make the family farm a great success. He approached this with abundant industry, the afore mentioned diligence, and, his father’s somewhat skeptical blessings.  He was the eldest child, after all, and the only son, so it stood to reason, and his father was not a man to stand in the way of hard work.  It was on the day after Gary cut the tips from three fingers of his right (and dominate) hand on what might be considered ‘complicated farm machinery’ that his father took a different view.  Gary came into his mother’s kitchen, bleeding extravagantly, but quietly.  Jeannie who came weekly to help around the house, and who was one but not the other, made up for any silence with memorable expletives and a full length passing out in the doorway.  His mother treated him with a constant headshake. After his hand was wrapped, his father stood and looked at him thoughtfully, fists shoved into his pockets, mouth pursed and his headshake at the same cadence as his mothers.  Gary remembered thinking that his mother and father had lived together a very long time.  His father’s head abruptly stopped its wag and his lips un-pursed.  He looked into Gary’s eyes and said “So. Son. What is it you think your calling might be?”

Gary went away to school.

By the time he met her, there remained only a strange bevel to the tops of the last three fingers of his right hand.  She said her name was Jezz, after Jezebel.  She said her mother liked the Bible.

Gary was shocked and incredulous.  “But why name you after that story?” he asked.  

Jezz smiled sideways at him. “I said she liked the bible, I didn’t say she’d read it.  I think she picked names from it at random to name her children, and her dogs for that matter.  You need to meet my brother Judas.”

Gary winced, but said nothing and Jezz smiled widely.  

“He calls himself Jude and tells people his mother liked the Beatles song.  I think she did, too.”

On the first sunny day after they met, they laid a blanket in a field just out of town and made love in the sunlight.  This was a first for Gary, and although it was Sunday and there was little chance of being interrupted by the farmer, Gary felt somehow wicked, but not bad, not bad at all.  After, they ate the lunch they had brought.  Gary pulled his jeans on right away, but Jezz seemed to not think of it at all.

For Gary, Sunday had been his day of rest, or at least change, which they told him, was as good as any rest might be.  As a child, he attended church with his mother, after chores and any schoolwork.  It was something that he continued to do into his teens, long after his two sisters had found reasons to avoid it.  

The Reverend Thornhurst was loud and fiery.  Gary may have gone for the simple contrast his sermons made to a quiet home life.  Shortly after Gary was born, the Reverend had arrived in their parish. He was a practical and earnest man, married to a mildly pretty woman of good family. She left him in under two years, to much local speculation.  The Reverend never spoke of it, but his sermons took on a touch of frenzy (and occasionally spittle, for those in the front pew).  Over the years, the many, many wicked women of the Bible were outlined in detail. Even the Virgin Mary was given a careful going over in the Christmas season. Somehow Gary associated women and Sunday. It was good to find it was something sweet and wholesome after all, just as his heart had always hinted.

Gary and Jezz stayed for some time in the field, enjoying the sunshine.  Gary on his stomach watching the slow progress of life in the grass, turned to look at her.  His Jezz; sitting naked and unconcerned in the sun, braiding grass stems with deft art. The look of concentration that had gentled her face, gripped him somehow.  His throat grew tight and he smiled, thinking he should read the story of Jezebel sometime and see what he thought of her now.

5 thoughts on “Inner Magic

  1. Wonderful write. I like the whimsical feel, the sense of wildness and haphazardness of the characters’/our paths. It reminds me a of “The Unbearable Lightness of Being,” one of my favorite books. Well done.


  2. ‘It is best, or so it seems to me, to arrive at writing from a place of stillness. There is depth in such writing. ‘

    This is so true! and so wonderfully present in your story . the quietness, the unconditional acceptance and careful observation of small things . what a delightful read

    I am just starting my day at work and the post seemed too long to go through right now, but once i started it was hard to stop


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